Book One
The Ordinary Dawn
The first two chapters — about 14 minutes
Chapter One — The Morning Tilt
Monday 20 October
The underground car park was nearly empty. Only Garret’s Aston and a cluster of electric cars plugged neatly into their bays remained.
As he stepped forward, a soft echo sounded behind him.
Footsteps.
He turned sharply.
Nothing. Just concrete, humming lights, the faint buzz of a charging cable.
He moved to the car, keys ready.
And then he saw it.
A slip of paper on the driver’s side door handle.
Folded precisely. Clean edges. No smudges from rain or oil.
He looked around quickly. The silence pressed close.
He lifted the note.
He unfolded it.
Inside, a single word written in crisp, unfamiliar block capitals:
LISTEN
His chest tightened.
He turned in a slow circle, scanning the levels above and the shadows at the edges. Nothing.
For a moment, the fluorescent buzz seemed to drop in pitch. He stopped and listened. The sound returned to normal.
He unlocked the car and slid inside, pulse hammering.
He didn’t start the engine.
Not yet.
He sat, the note on his knee, the air in the car cold and still.
Listen to what?
To who?
He closed his eyes.
He thought about the revised figures and the request at the committee meeting to send the file to Risk. The position was still open. Was this about the numbers?
Listen.
That morning
In the kitchen, Garret made coffee while he scanned the market headlines on his phone. They promised calm. The figures he had seen at work on Friday told a less reassuring story.
A set of municipal-bond flows had been revised without an explanation he trusted. Miriam had been unusually guarded when he tried to raise it last week. He meant to ask again.
The printed paper on the island offered its own reassurance: markets steady, conditions improving. Garret folded it shut. Nobody had mentioned the figures he could not reconcile.
“Morning.”
He turned. Emma stood in the doorway, suit immaculate, hair straightened, her expression bright with purpose. Twenty-three, and already carrying herself like someone with places to be and people to sharpen.
“Coffee?” he asked.
She poured herself one without waiting for an answer. “I’ve got a meeting at nine. We’re reviewing a case on systemic bias in promotion decisions. Big one.”
Garret raised an eyebrow. “Isn’t everything systemic these days?”
She shot him a look. Amused, but edged. “If everything were working properly, it wouldn’t be systemic, would it?”
He took another sip. “Or perhaps the case is more complicated than the summary makes it sound.”
Emma set her cup down. They used to debate easily in the mornings. Lately, neither of them knew when to stop.
She sat, crossing her legs neatly. Her phone buzzed twice.
“You look tired,” she said.
“Just thinking,” he replied.
“About what?”
He hesitated. The revised figures. Miriam’s guarded answers. His growing suspicion that the decision had been made before anyone read the data.
Instead he said, “The usual.”
“That’s your problem,” she said lightly. “You think too much. Just do.”
“Doing without thinking is how we ended up with 2008.”
She rolled her eyes. “Dad. The world didn’t end.”
“No,” he murmured. “But a lot of people’s lives did.”
Emma paused, as though his answer had caught her off guard.
“A lot of people’s lives,” she repeated. For a moment she was simply turning the phrase over, as if testing whether it was true.
He waited.
“A partner at the firm had us read a piece last week,” she said finally, looking at the table rather than at him. “A sociologist. He argued that 2008 proved markets couldn’t self-regulate, that left alone, systems protect the people already inside them.” She kept her voice careful, academic. “His point was that intervention isn’t interference. It’s the correction.”
“Whose correction?” Garret asked.
She looked up. “That’s the part I’m still working out,” she said.
Lisa came in, tying her hair back. Emma drained her coffee, kissed Garret’s cheek and hurried upstairs to finish dressing. He watched her go, wishing he had asked one more question.
Garret kissed Lisa goodbye and stepped onto the drive. Across the lane, the identical roofs of Harmony Gardens emerged from the mist. He climbed into the Aston and headed for London.
The car found the A40. London waited.
Chapter Two — The Performance
8:30 a.m. – Bishopsgate
At half past eight, Garret parked the Aston beneath the Bishopsgate offices. He shut off the engine and walked towards reception.
The lobby was immaculate, as always. Too immaculate. Screens rotated through inspirational slogans: Agility. Vision. Transformation. Words that once carried weight now felt like costumes worn thin by repetition. The young receptionist – perfect hair, symmetrical smile – greeted him in a tone so polished it slid right off the ear.
He scanned his badge. The beep sounded like approval and surveillance wrapped into one.
A lift stood open beyond reception. Garret stepped inside and pressed six.
Upstairs, the trading floor was already alive, a glow of screens in half-light. Graphs jittered, charts pulsed, threads of code ran like quiet incantations. People moved with a practised briskness, but their voices were low, careful, almost rehearsed. Everything felt slightly off. Just… synchronised.
He walked the aisle between desks. Two junior analysts were comparing the risk summary on a monitor with the printed version. One held a pen above the paper.
“Don’t say decline,” one murmured, not looking up. “Say rebalancing.”
“And if someone asks why the number fell?”
“The number’s in the appendix. Stone signed off the wording.”
Garret paused behind them. The analyst with the paper covered a line with his hand.
“Morning,” he said.
The analyst with the paper managed a tight smile. “Morning, Garret.”
He moved on without returning the smile.
Miriam was already at her station, spine straight, glasses low on her nose, her desk as tidy as a surgeon’s tray. She looked up briefly, giving him a small, real smile – one of the last real things on this floor.
“Morning,” she said.
“How was the weekend?”
“Quiet. Grandkids wore me out.” She returned to her screen, fingers moving with the precision of someone who still believed the work meant something.
He glanced at the market feed Miriam kept open beside her keyboard. She had avoided this question on Friday.
He said only, “You seeing any odd patterns in overnight flows?”
She paused. Just for a heartbeat. Then shook her head. “Nothing I’d mention,” she said.
Not nothing. Nothing she’d mention.
He moved on.
10:00 a.m. – The Performance
The glass-walled conference room overlooked the trading floor like a theatre box. Everyone filed in around the long, gleaming white table, where the chairs forced them to sit straight. A bank of screens streamed news tickers and adverts for the firm itself.
It was called the Monday Results Meeting. Unofficially: The Performance.
Stone entered last.
His gaze swept the room as if weighing each person’s value against a scale only he could see.
Garret felt the old ripple of the man’s presence. Tailored, lean, effortlessly controlled. Stone always carried the same quietly electric assurance, the kind that made people lean forward without realising.
“Morning,” Stone said. His tone was smooth enough to be warm and sharp enough to be a warning. “We stand at the edge of extraordinary change. Our task is not to adapt, but to lead.”
A few staff nodded. Harriet already had her presentation waiting on the screen.
Stone had used the same line last month, and the month before. Garret remembered because he had written it down the first time.
Harriet, the strategist, began her presentation. A rainbow of bar graphs glowed behind her.
“Our digital ecosystems initiative continues to expand,” she said, her voice bright with curated optimism. “Inclusion metrics are rising. Engagement pathways are strong. We are converging toward future-aligned models.”
Converging.
The word made the hair on Garret’s arms lift.
He’d seen that exact phrasing – convergence pathways – in a confidential memo routed from Geneva two weeks ago. A memo that should never have been on his desk in the first place.
The slide clicked forward. More colours. More certainty.
Reed from Operations took the floor, his briefing pages covered in last-minute changes.
“We’re seeing some bottlenecks in distribution networks,” he began. “Labour shortages are—”
Stone’s smile sharpened. “Frame it as opportunity, Reed.”
“Yes, of course,” Reed said. “Opportunity for… alignment.”
Alignment. Convergence. Pathways.
Garret felt a faint hum just behind his ears. More like a pulse in the air.
Then it was his turn.
He stood, adjusting his glasses, his slides stark and colourless behind him.
“Our exposure in credit derivatives is deeper than recognised,” he began. “Liquidity is thinning. One shock could transmit faster than 2008 due to tightened interbank dependencies. We should be preparing for—”
Eyes flicking to phones. Pens stilled. A yawn half-stifled.
He pressed on. “Additionally, some flows in municipal bonds do not line up with historical patterns. There are movements that look—”
He hesitated.
If he said engineered, he’d be dismissed as alarmist.
“—unusual,” he finished.
Silence. Polite. Hollow.
He concluded, “We need to tighten exposure and run contingency models, not expansion plans.”
A beat.
Stone gave two brief claps and turned towards the committee secretary, who was entering the decisions in the minutes. Nobody had asked about the downside model.
“Thank you, Garret,” Stone said. “The exposure deserves a proper review. Send the raw position file to Risk today; the committee can consider it once the figures are reconciled.”
Garret sat. His pulse ticked hard in his throat.
Stone had asked for the figures. Garret wondered what would happen to them once they were out of his hands.
Stone moved to the next presenter with a smooth pivot, as if brushing away dust.
HR’s next slide showed the retention trend in green. A footer credited an AI-compliance pilot with reconciling the categories. There was no figure for departures.
Garret wrote Convergence and Alignment in his notebook. Both words had appeared in the Geneva memo.
When the meeting finally ended, Stone placed a hand on Garret’s shoulder. Warm, heavy, precisely weighted.
“I know what you want,” Stone said quietly. “The board won’t unwind that exposure without an alternative. Give me one we can put in front of them.”
“Reducing the position is the alternative,” Garret said.
Stone looked at the notebook in Garret’s hand. “Then quantify what it costs us if you’re wrong.”
The room emptied.
Garret stayed behind to collect his papers. Stone’s request meant another model, another day. The position would remain open.
After the meeting, Garret went back to the position file. Variances had been trimmed; losses reclassified. The summary was easier to read than the entries beneath it.
He ran a quick query in an old reporting tool – one he’d kept access to out of stubbornness. The system hesitated, then returned raw data. Unfiltered.
The municipal-bond flows showed a volume mismatch that the board summary did not explain. The raw entries were still there.
He rubbed his forehead.
Stop overthinking.
Or don’t stop. That’s how you missed 2008 until it was almost too late.
He opened the drawer and slipped his notebook inside.
Don’t leave it on the desk.
Not today.
At noon, Martin knocked on the glass and stepped in without waiting.
Emma’s godfather. An old friend, one of the last of the floor’s old guard. Creased shirt, loosened tie, tired but warm eyes.
“You were sharp in there,” Martin said, dropping into the chair with a sigh. “Too sharp. You know they don’t want sharp anymore.”
“I can’t dress data as theatre.”
“Then they’ll stop listening.” Martin rubbed his temples. “Careful. Stone’s not a man who likes disrupted choreography.”
Garret half-smiled. “You think this is choreography?”
Martin hesitated. Then: “You ever get the sense the stories around here… line up? Too neatly? Like they’re coming from the same script?”
Garret felt a cold echo in his spine. “Yes.”
Martin exhaled. “They still want analysis. They just want it in a form that won’t upset the decision they’ve made. You spend a week checking a figure and someone changes its heading in ten seconds.”
The bitterness in his tone was new, deeper than last week. Garret recognised the sound of a man beginning to leave.
“You thinking of retiring?” Garret asked.
“Not retiring,” Martin said quietly. “Leaving.”
The word lingered in the air between them.
“Don’t,” Garret murmured. “Not yet. Not when—”
He stopped.
Martin raised an eyebrow. “Not when what?”
Garret held the silence. Too long. Martin’s eyes sharpened with concern.
“You okay?” he asked.
Garret forced a nod.
“Just tired.”
Martin didn’t look convinced. “Then rest. Before you start seeing ghosts in spreadsheets.”
He squeezed Garret’s shoulder once and left.
The afternoon brought another meeting. Smaller. Quieter. One of those sessions where decisions were made without being acknowledged.
Four of them sat in a narrow room – Garret, two mid-level strategists, and Carver from Market Oversight, a man with the expression of someone perpetually unimpressed.
The screen displayed a muted ticker.
Carver opened the revised board pack. “Risk has asked us to reconcile the downside case before we circulate another version.”
Garret said nothing.
On the screen, Garret’s downside case sat in an appendix marked FOR TECHNICAL REVIEW. The front page still carried the earlier exposure figure.
Carver looked at him. “Your warning is in there, Garret. But we have to validate the assumptions before it goes to the committee.”
“The positions aren’t assumptions,” Garret said. “They’re on the book.”
One of the strategists turned her laptop towards him. “The liquidity model is one interpretation. We need the same definitions on every page.”
“How long will that take?” Garret asked.
“Next week’s Risk Committee,” Carver said. “The board pack closes this afternoon.”
Next week. The trades would still be on the books by then.
When the meeting ended, Garret walked straight past the coffee machine and into the corridor, pulse unsteady.
He needed air.
Garret stepped outside into the narrow strip of terrace on the sixth floor, a glass barrier separating him from the drop toward Bishopsgate. The city below churned with traffic and motion – but from here it looked distant, muffled, like scenery behind protective glass.
London moved, but felt less like a place and more like a set waiting for actors.
He inhaled slowly. The cold bit at his lungs. He welcomed it.
Two analysts stepped onto the terrace with coffees, arguing quietly about a client call. They stopped when they noticed him. One nodded; the other turned back inside.
Garret turned away.
By late afternoon, Garret again noticed a low vibration beneath the office noise. It might have been ventilation, but he could still feel it when the fans paused.
At six, he packed his case and shut down his screens. But as he stood, he caught a flicker on the display two desks away. For a moment, the financial dashboard glitched, revealing a raw string of characters before smoothing back into pastel-coloured metrics:
UK_REGION_04: PATHWAY STATUS. ADJUSTMENT INITIATED
He blinked.
By the time he reached the desk, the message was gone. The ordinary dashboard had returned, with the day’s risk summary marked green.
He looked around.
No one else had noticed.
Or no one was willing to.
He walked away.
He took the lift down. By the time the doors opened onto the car park, the code from the screen was still turning in his mind. He folded the note, put it into his wallet and started the engine. The Aston’s growl settled him, the one honest sound he’d heard all day. He eased into the ramp and climbed toward street level, headlights cutting through the artificial gloom.
But as he reached the exit barrier, something happened.
The barrier arm should have lifted automatically.
Instead, it stayed down.
For three seconds.
Four.
Five.
Too long for a mechanical delay.
Then – finally – the arm rose.
As if it had been waiting for something.
Or someone.
The Ordinary Dawn is Book One of the Ordinary Dawn Trilogy.